What are the four activities teens like the most?

In the years between 13 and 18 teenagers can find many things that they would like, for example smoking, drinking, doing drugs, and  having sex. Teens are very curious of cigarettes, especially the teens with smoking parents; they think that smoking gives them more "status" and respect from the other people. Same thing happens with drinking liquor like beer, wine, whiskey, tequila, and rum, which are some of the various alcoholic drinks that teens like, influenced by parents, friends, or simple curiosity. In the issue of drugs adolescents want a strong experience that smoking and drinking can´t give, so they get drugs like; cannabis, cocaine, and heroin which are substances that adolescents consume. And finally in this stage of age, teens experience external and internal changes like alterations in hormones that produce attraction to the other sex. For this reason teens start looking at sex like a normal situation. In conclusion teenagers like drinking, somoking, doing drugs and having sex by pleasure, for take respect and admiration of others, influnce of parents, or simple curiosity.  

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In the years between 13 and 18 teenagers can find many things that they would like, for example smoking, drinking, doing drugs, and  having sex. Teens are very curious of cigarettes, especially the teens with smoking parents(,)(;) they think that smoking gives (them) more "status" and respect for(from) the other people. Same thing happens with drinking(;) liquor like beer, wine, whiskey, tequila, and rum, which are some of the various alcoholic drinks that teens like, influenced by parents, friends, or simple curiosity. In the issue of drugs adolecents(adolescents) want a strong experience that smoking and drinking can´t give, then(so) they get drugs like; cannabis, cocaine, and heroin(,) which are substances that adolescents consume. And finally in this stage of age, teens experience external and internal changes, and present(like) alterations in hormones than(that) produce attraction to the other sex(.) in teenagers, (For this reason)then teens (start) looking the(at) sex like a normal situation. (Add a conclusion sentence listing the four activities.)

What are the four activities teens like the most?

In the years between 13 and 18 teenagers can find many things that they would like, for example smoking, drinking, doing drugs, and  having sex. Teens are very curious of cigarettes, especially the teens with smoking parents, they think that smoking gives more "status" and respect for the other people. Same thing happens with drinking; liquor like beer, wine, whiskey, tequila, and rum, which are some of the various alcoholic drinks that teens like, influenced by parents, friends, or simple curiosity. In the issue of drugs adolecents want a strong experience that smoking and drinking can´t give, then they get drugs like; cannabis, cocaine, and heroin, which are substances that adolescents consume. And finally in this stage of age, teens experience external and internal changes, and present alterations in hormones than produce attraction to the other sex in teenagers, then teens looking the sex like a normal situation.

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What are the three activities teens like the most?

In the years between 13 and 18 of the human, (teenagers) can be find many things than (that they would like, for example) likes teenagers, smoke(smoking), drink(drinking), (doing) drugs, and  (having) sex, but what influences for they likes these things?. Teens take (are) very curiosity(curious) of cigarrettes(cigarettes), especially the teens with (smoking) parents, they think that smoke(smoking) give(gives) more "status" and respect for the other people. Same thing happens with drink(drinking); the liquor (like), beer, wine, whisky(whiskey), tequila, (and) rum, (which are some of)is the various alcholic(alcoholic) drinks than(that) teens likes(like), influence(influenced) by parents, friends, or simple curiosity. In the issue of drugs adolecents want a strong experience than(that smoking and drinking) can´t gives(give) smoke and drink, then (they get) gets the drugs (like); cannabis, cocaine, (and) heroin, (which) are substances than(that) adolescents consume. And finally in this stage of age, teens experience external and internal changes, and present sexual instincts than attracts the teenagers to sex.(explain this last idea more in detail)

What influences teens to do the things than they likes?

In the years between 13 and 18 of the human, can be find many things than likes teenagers, smoke, drink, drugs, and sex, but what influences for they likes these things?. Teens take very curiosity of cigarrettes, especially the teens with smokers parents, they think that smoke give more "status" and respect for the other people. Same thing happens with drink; the liquor, beer, wine, whisky, tequila, rum, is the various alcholic drinks than teens likes, influence by parents, friends, or simple curiosity. In the issue of drugs adolecents want a strong experience than can´t gives smoke and drink, then gets the drugs; cannabis, cocaine, heroin, are substances than adolescents consume. And finally in this stage of age, teens experience external and internal changes, and present sexual instincts than attracts the teenagers to sex.

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Think before you smoke #3

Being a smoker brings many social, health and environmental problems. Many people treat smokers as people with psychological problems, and believe they are criminals. In some cases the smoker suffers from discrimination, and can not smoke anywhere; they can smoke only if there are other smokers. Smokers get sick more easily than non smokers and are prone to cancer of lung or others parts of body; bronchitis and cardiovascular diseases. About environmental problems, smoking produces CO2, in other words, carbon dioxide that is a contaminating gas. So if you don't want to be discriminated, get sick, or pollute the environment, don´t smoke.

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Being a smoker brings many social, health and environmental problems. Many people treat smokers as people with psychological problems, and believe they are criminals. In some cases the smoker suffers from discrimination, and can not smoke anywhere; they can smoke only if there are other smokers. The smokers(Smokers get sick more easily than non smokers and are prone to) are more easy than sicken, like cancer of lung or others parts of body; the bronchitis is other effect of smoke equal than (and) cardiovascular disease(diseases). About eviromental(environmental) problems, smoking produce(produces) CO2, in other words, carbon dioxide that is (a) contaminate(contaminating) gas. (So if you don't want to be discriminated, get sick, or pollute the environment, don´t smoke.)