Review

Structure for This Class

·         Introduction: 5 sentences, and a Thesis statement with 2 controlling ideas (one for each body paragraph)

·         Body paragraph 1

·         Body paragraph 2

·         Conclusion: Summary of main ideas and a personal conclusion (opinion, recommendation, etc)

Travel on Disney World

Disney World, or officialy known as Walt Disney World Resort, ubicated in approximately 34 km southwest of Orlando, Florida, United States. Disney World (DW) is a famous recreational complex recognized by its theme parks and multiple hotels. DW has four theme parks (in which are better known Magic Kingdom, Animal Kingdom, Epcot), two water parks (Typhoon Lagoon, Blizzard Beach), and 23 themed resort hotels (Disney´s Grand Floridian, Disney´s Animal Kingdom Lodge, Disney´s Beach Club). In the mid-year vacations of 2002, I´m goed to Disney World with my family. Are one of things that I more remember of my childhood.

The week of 24th to 30th June I and my family are going to Orlando, Florida, USA, to pass the mid-year vacations, in Disney World. We´re lodged in Quality Inn, all days come an bus that transport us to parks, The first two days We are rested for the large air trip, and visited Orlando and her malls, restaurants, and atractions. Later the third day we goes to DW to Magic Kingdom, and participate in many atractions like splash mountain, big thunder mountain, Buzz Lightyear´s adventure, Peter Pan´s flight, and others. After we goed to Animal Kingdom and visited the Tree of Life, Expedition Everest, Pocahontas and Her Forest Friends, and others. And last goed to MGM, officialy known as Disney's Hollywood Studios.

I´m remember that three experiences I like more, are the food, the atractions, look the Fifa World Cup final. Normally the breakfast we realized in hotel, the lunch in the park, and the dinner again in hotel. I like so much the food in the hotel because is buffet, and in the park depending of theme of place. The atractions was amazings, I would say that are the best that I´m looking, my height was ideal for entry to most games. And finally we had the good fortune of live the Fifa World Cup 2002 play offs, and the incredible final between Brazil and Germany, win the South America team 2-0, both goals were for Ronaldo "El Fenómeno", this fact made in my an pleasure for the Futbol and for Brazil. In conclusion this travel to Disney World impact me in various forms, like cultural, sport, and emotionaly.

Paper 2 Activity 1

Post Paper 2 Activity 1

Yes to the Mobile Phone, but with responsibility

The mobile phone, more known like cell phone, is an electronic device that has important use for humans. Nowadays the uses of cell phone is accessible to the youth, so the schools have to choose whether banning or allowing the use of mobile phones in the class. There are three reason that I believe justify the use of cell phones in school by students: in case of an emergency, as a school tool, and for entertainment. In an academic year, many situations can happen where the student needs calling like a problem at school with a change of schedule, etc. The emergencies exist, then they need cell phones. But student should only use them in case of an emergency. Nowadays, cell phones have a many applications like internet connection, dictionary, calculator, camera, etc. These applications can be useful in a class, so now the cell can be a school tool. Teachers can seize the mobile phone if students do not use it correctly. The fact that the student goes to school to study does not mean that he can not have fun. Students can have fun in school, that is the reason why there are recess times, and these are moments where the phones can be used. In conclusion, the student can use the mobile phone in school because of an emergency, as a school tool, and for fun, but only with the responsibility that this does not affect the school performance.

Review

The mobile phone, more know(known) like cell phone, is an electronic device that have(has) important use to(for) human(humans). Actuallly(Nowadays) the uses of cell phone has(is) come(accessible) to the youth, (so) the schools have to face(choose) if(whether) banned(banning) or allowed(allowing) the use (of) mobile phones in the class. There are three reason that I(´m) belive(believe) allow(justify) the use of cell phone(phones) in school to(by) students: by(in case of an) emergency, can be(as) a school tool, and for student funny(entertainment). In (an) academic year, sucess many situation(situations can happen) that(where) the student needs calling in cell phone like a family problem(,) exits of (at) school(,)(with) a change of horary(schedule), etc. The emergencies exist, then they needs(need) cell phones. But student only should (only) use (them) in (case of an) emergency. Nowadays, cell phones had(have) a many aplications(applications) like connecting to internet (connection), dictionary, calculator, camera, etc. This(These) aplications(applications) can be useful in a class, (so) now the cell can be a school tool, but not a toy in lesson. Teacher(Teachers) can seize the mobile phone(,) if student(students do) not used(use it) correctly. The fact that the student go(goes) to school to study(,)(does) not main(mean) that he can not have fun(,)(.) student(Students) can have fun in school, that is the reason by(why) exist the(there are) recess (times), and there(these) are moments that(where the phones) can be use(used) the phone. In conclusion, the student can use the mobile phone in school by(because of an) emergency, is(as) a school tool, and for funny(fun), but only with the responsability(responsibility) that this (does) not affect the school performance.

Yes to the Mobile Phone, but with responsability

The mobile phone, more know like cell phone, is an electronic device that have important use to human. Actuallly the uses of cell phone has come to the youth, the schools have to face if banned or allowed the use mobile phones in the class. There are three reason that I´m belive allow the use of cell phone in school to students: by emergency, can be a school tool, and for student funny. In academic year, sucess many situation that the student needs calling in cell phone like a family problem, exits of school, a change of horary, etc. The emergencies exist, then they needs cell phones. But student only should use in emergency. Nowadays, cell phones had a many aplications like connecting to internet, dictionary, calculator, camera, etc. This aplications can be useful in a class, now the cell can be a school tool, but not a toy in lesson. Teacher can seize the mobile phone, if student not used correctly. The fact that the student go to school to study, not main that he can not have fun, student can have fun in school, that is the reason by exist the recess, and there are moments that can be use the phone. In conclusion, the student can use the mobile phone in school by emergency, is a school tool, and for funny, but only with the responsability that this not affect the school performance.

Writing Activity 6

Write a paragraph where you persuade you reader whether the use of mobile phones for students should or should not be banned at school.

McDonalds vs Burger King

The restaurants of fast food are big business these times. Two restaurants that are actually more transcendental are McDonald´s and Burger King, colloquially known as Mac and Burger, both have similarities like food and service, but also have differences like quality and popularity. In food, both haves dedicated to fast food, but specialty in hamburgers; the hamburger icon or original of Mac is the "Big Mac" and in case of Burger is the "Whooper", both are delicious. The service of McDonald's and Burger King is equal; the customer goes to the box, orders, buys, and in less than 5 minutes later the clerks give him the food. Both services are good, but Mac gives more experienced service. Referring to the issue of quality, Mac has more quality than Burger because they think more in the customer. Mac´s facilities are bigger and cleanner, but the food of Burger is more tasty. Mac is more popular than Burger King because of its international popularity; on other hand, Burger is only popular in the USA and other countries with American influence. In conclusion, McDonald's is better than Burger King, but Burger isn't a bad option.

Review

The restaurants of fast food take(are) more(big) business in this(these) times. Two restaurants that (are) actually more transcendents(transcendental) are McDonald´s and Burger King, colloquially know(known) as Mac and Burger, both had(have) similarities like food and service, but (also) had(have) differences like quality and popularity. In food, both haves dedicated to fast food, but specialty in hamburgers(,)(;) the hamburger icon or original of Mac is the "Big Mac" and in case of Burger is the "Whooper", both are delicious. The service of Mcdonalds(McDonald's) and Burger King are(is) equal(,)(;) the customer go(goes) to the box, order(orders), buy(buys), and (in less than 5 minutes) later (the clerks) give him the food(,)(.) both(Both) service(services) are good, only(but) Mac give(gives) more service or experienced service. (Referring to) The(the) issue of quality, Mac have(has) more quality than Burger(,) because they think more in the customer(,)(.) Mac´s facilities are bigs(bigger) and cleans(cleanner)(;)(,) but (the) food of Burger is more tasty. The popularity of Mac (is more popular) are more than Burger King(,) by McDonalds had (because of its) international popularity; in(on) other hand, Burger (is) only take popularity(popular) in (the) USA and others(other) countries with American influence. In conclusion, McDonalds(McDonald's) is best(better) than Burger King, but Burger isn't a bad option.

McDonalds vs Burger King

The restaurants of fast food take more business in this times. Two restaurants that actually more transcendents are McDonald´s and Burger King, colloquially know as Mac and Burger, both had similarities like food and service, but had differences like quality and popularity. In food, both haves dedicated to fast food, but specialty in hamburgers, the hamburger icon or original of Mac is the "Big Mac" and in case of Burger is the "Whooper", both are delicious. The service of Mcdonalds and Burger King are equal, the customer go to the box, order, buy, and later give him the food, both service are good, only Mac give more service or experienced service. The issue of quality, Mac have more quality than Burger, because they think more in the customer, Mac´s facilities are bigs and cleans; but food of Burger is more tasty. The popularity of Mac are more than Burger King, by McDonalds had international popularity; in other hand, Burger only take popularity in USA and others countries with American influence. In conclusion, McDonalds is best than Burger King, but Burger isn´t a bad option.

Writing Activity 5

Write a paragraph where you compare and/or contrast two restaurants.

MLS vs Premier League

The Major League of Soccer (MLS) and the Premier League (PL) are the futbol soccer tournaments of USA and England respectively. My topic is if these tournaments represent the culture of their respective countries? First I will describe both tournaments; The  MLS was founded on December 16th, 1993, in compliance with Alan Rothenberg of USSF (United State Soccer Federation) to make a league of first division, a memorial change for FIFA World Cup 1994. In the case of the PL, it was founded in May 27th 1992 with the name of Football League. This tournament had problems where they could not pay to clubs and resulted in an economic crisis, then the FA (The Football Association) created) the Premier League.

Second I will compare both leagues. The MLS has 18 teams which are divided in 2 confederations, east and west. The season begins in March and ends in November; each team plays 34 games per season, and the 10 best team qualify to the post-season to decide the champion. The Premier has 20 teams, and each club plays twice with the rest, once in its stadium and once at their opponents playing a total of 38 games. The season begins in August and ends in May of the next year; the best qualified is the champion. As trascendental players of both tournaments we have for the MLS David Beckham, Thierry Henry, and Marco Pappa, and for the PL Wayne Rooney, Didier Drogba, and Cesc Fabregas.

Regarding cultures, both leagues are ordered like the British and American cultures are. The schedules are strict, the public in stadiums do not get altered and destroy things. But one diference is that British are more extricts with rules; take for example the case of Wayne Rooney who used vulgar language in a game, and the Premier League gave him a punishment of 3 games where he could not play. The MLS isn´t extrict in this. Another diference is that for American sport the MLS is not that important, on the other hand the Premier League is a league with more public in England. In conclusion the Premier League represents more the British culture than the MLS represents the American culture because Soccer is more important in England than in the United States.

Review

(The) Major League of Soccer (MLS) and (the) Premier League (PL) are a(the) futbol soccer tournament(tournaments) of USA and England respectively(,)(.) my(My) topic is if this(these)tournaments represent the culture of his(their) respective countries?(.) First I will describe both tournaments(;) (The)  MLS is(was) founded in(on) December 16th, 1993, in compliance of(with) Alan Rothenberg to(of) USSF (United State Soccer Federation) to make a league of first division, a memorial change for FIFA World Cup 1994. In (the) case of (the) PL, (it) is(was) founded in May 27th 1992 giving to the(with the name of) Football Leaguel(.) (This) tournament which had problems (where they) of can(could) not pay to clubs and result(resulted in an) a economic crisis, then the FA (The Football Association) create(created) the Premier League.

Second I will compare both leagues(,)(.) (The) MLS had(has) 18 teams and(which) are divided in 2 confederations, east and west(,)(.) the(The) season begin(begins) in March and end(ends) in November(,)(;) each team play(plays) 34 games for(per) season, (and the) 10 best team qualify to the post-season for(to) decide the champion. For(The) Premier(,) had(has) 20 teams, (and) each club plays twice with the rest, once in their(its) stadium and once at their opponents(,) (playing) in a total of 38 games(,) (.) (The)season begin(begins) in August and end(ends) in May of the next year(,)(;) the best qualified is the champion. As trascendental players of both tournament(tournaments) (we) had(have) for (the) MLS David Beckham, Thierry Henry, (and) Marco Pappa, and for (the) PL Wayne Rooney, Didier Drogba, (and) Cesc Fabregas.

In respect(Regarding) of cultures, both leagues are ordered like (the)  british(British) and americans(American) cultures (are)(,)(.) the(The) schedules are extrict(strict) meting, the public in stadiums (do)not (get) altered and destroy things, with exception of some teams of latin´s states of MLS. But in(one) diference (is that) englands(British) are more extricts with rules(,)(;) take for example the case of Wayne Rooney(,) that(who) use(used) a vulgar language in a game, and (the) Premier League gives(gave him) a punishment with(of) 3 games than(where he could) not play. The MLS isn´t extrict in this. Other(Another) diference is that for American sport the MLS (is) not gives more(that) importance(important), instead(on the other hand) (the) Premier League is a league with more public in England. In conclusion the Premier League represents more (the) british(British) culture than (the) MLS represents (the) american(American) culture(,) by(because) Soccer had(is) more importance(important) in England than (in the)  United States.

MLS vs Premier

Major League of Soccer(MLS) and Premier League(PL) are a futbol soccer tournament of USA and England respectively, my topic is if this tournaments represent the culture of his respective countries?. First I will describe both tournaments MLS is founded in December 16th, 1993, in compliance of Alan Rothenberg to USSF (United State Soccer Federation) to make a league of first division, a memorial change for FIFA World Cup 1994. In case of PL, is founded in May 27th 1992 giving to the Football League, tournament which had problems of can not pay to clubs and result a economic crisis, then the FA (The Football Association) create the Premier League.

Second I will compare both leagues, MLS had 18 teams and are divided in 2 confederations, east and west, the season begin in March and end in November, each team play 34 games for season, 10 best team qualify to the post-season for decide the champion. For Premier, had 20 teams, each club plays twice with the rest, once in their stadium and once at their opponents, in a total of 38 games, season begin in August and end in May of the next year, the best qualified is the champion. As trascendental players of both tournament had for MLS David Beckham, Thierry Henry, Marco Pappa, and for PL Wayne Rooney, Didier Drogba, Cesc Fabregas.

In respect of cultures, both leagues are ordered like british and americans cultures, the schedules are extrict meting, the public in stadiums not altered and destroy things, with exception of some teams of latin´s states of MLS. But in diference englands are more extricts with rules, take for example the case of Wayne Rooney, that use a vulgar language in a game, and Premier League gives a punishment with 3 games than not play. The MLS isn´t extrict in this. Other diference is that for American sport the MLS not gives more importance, instead Premier League is a league with more public in England. In conclusion the Premier League represents more british culture than MLS represents american culture, by Soccer had more importance in England than United States.

Internal Evaluation

Post the script of your Internal Evaluation (recording).