viernes, 6 de mayo de 2011

Review

(Are teenagers free?)Teenagers are freedom?
 
In the process between childhood and becoming an adult, better known as adolescence, teens combat many physical changes (such as growing up) and psychological changes like rebellion to rules and sex atraction(attraction). Nevertheless, these changes influnce(influence) on their decisions, that is to say they affect their freedom(?). Biogically teens become more mature, their bodies show increase in size, teens show more respect for others. Mainly due to the fact that they are no longer considered children.This, neither, does not affect (affects) their freedom, and since freedom is not material. But in issue of psychological (what can the) changes can be?(,) for(For) example, teenagers'  rebellion to rules, teens think that rules removing (remove)freedom, they think this by the bad concept of freedom, which is "do whatever you want", but (it is) a wrong concept not mind live without freedom. And when they are atracted(attracted) by sex, teenagers should be careful, the sex can become a vice, and person with (this) vice is(are) losing her(their) freedom. In conclusion freedom of teens when they suffers(suffer) many physical and psychological changes, like grow(growing) up, rebellion to rules,(and) sex atraction(attraction), don´t be affected, if and only if (Parents should be careful of) this changes (so they do) not become a vice.

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