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No to banning the fast food to youngers(youngsters)

Actually one of the most consumed things, especially in young people, is the fast food. The facts(fact) that made(makes) an aliment(food) to a fast food is the quickly form that food is serviced. The problem of this type of food is the health dangers, and then many people look these aliments(food) like the same Dead(death itself). There is the reason by(why) many people don´t like that young people eat fast food. But is continue a bad idea (continues) that banned(banning) the fast food to the youngers(youngsters is not the solution)(,) because fast food isn´t a big danger(,)(.) banning(Banning) the fast food will(would) be banned(banning) the freedom of youngers(youngsters), and (it would be)is unjust banning the fast food only to people under the age of 18.

The danger of fast food is the calories that (it) have(has)(,) that(which) produce(produces) fat in the body(. The) excess of this element causes health damage(,)(.) taken(Taking) for example the famous restaurant McDonald´s(,) there Fries(fries) have 400 calories per 100 grams; (a) BigMac hamburger has 540 calories, while the bacon cheeseburger Angus weighs 790. Calories for other dining options are Chicken McNuggets (which) contains(contain) 190 to 460, Filet-O-Fish at 380, McRib sandwich 500, and McFlurry 630 calories. But this only effect(affects) if the person consume(consumes) more than he needs, the excess is the real problem, then(that) is the reason that(why) fast food isn´t a big danger. Banning the fast food will be banning the freedom of young people(,) because they have the right to eat what we have seen that does not cause any damage(,)(.) such as fast (Fast) food(,) (is not bad) provided they(we) do not overeat, as (I) had been talking before. The advantages of fast food is the price, service, and taste, these are the reason(reasons) because(why) the young people likes(like) this aliments(food). Then if they (do) not (go) down into the excess, youngers(youngsters) are freedom(free) to eat fast food when wished.

(It) Is(is) unjust banning the fast food to youngers(youngsters) and (not) to adults not(,)(.) if(If) fast food is bad(,) (it) should not be banned to both youth and adults. Young people are humans like adults; both take the same likes as(and the) same healthy problems. It is obvious that there are differences and one have(has) more life experience than the other, but (they) deserves(deserve) the same treatment(,) because both are humans.

In conclusion banned(banning) the fast food to people under the age of 18 is incorrect(,) because fast food isn´t a big danger(,) if (you) don´t be(eat it) an(in) excess; (it) is a form of banning the freedom of young people(,) because they have the right to eat what we have seen that does not cause any danger; and (it) is unjust, for both youngers(youngsters) and adults (since they) deserves(deserve) the same treatment of(regarding eating) eat fast food.